Your Thoughts on our TV Pilots please

Hi Guys

Just hoping to get your feedback on the first 2 Tv Pliots we have done for our Ballistic Builds TV Show, thanks for your help and please ask your friends their oppions also
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EVkXLh4OP8Y
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjLTyLlgJok

Thanks Steve
RDP Motorsport USA

 

Wow man congrats can't wait to see some more videos.

 

thankyou mate

 

It's enough to give a crab a boner!

Cool stuff, Steve!

 

Nice vids!

Comments: Camera work. It's like home movies at Christmas time. It's great quality video but get wider shots and SLOW down. you get dizzy jumping through a couple of images a second. That's ok for the intro section but once you get to the show part. If you've got a total time constraint then get rid of half the shots.

That's my 2 cents... Oh yea, get a couple of shots where Bull is standing next to people so you get some reference on just how big he really is.

 

Very cool Mate. :worthy:

And yea, forget the return text. lol S T O P changing numbers on me. hahahaha

 

thanks for the thoughts mate

had that number for 8 months bro hehe

 

haha I still have your numbers from when you still lived in Aussie land. lololololol

 

I really liked the 2nd one. Honestly, the 1st was a little over the top. Maybe trying a little to hard to be funny.

 

I thought is was a great way to show they work AND play hard...

 

Are you Siskel or Ebert?

 

very cool .. good luck with it steve

 

The first version had about 4 seconds of BJB... This version has zero seconds... WTF?? LOL :grin: :future:

Looks great!!

 

I agree but when your piloting a show it might need to (and i cant believe i am even saying this) have the boobs part edited out...and maybe the pants down part too...and maybe the monica joke...BJ jokes should be saved for later LOL

Thats something would be good once you got a show...but probably not for the pilot.

And I agree with dave...slow it down a bit...you get lost in the craziness

but as a whole it was good stuff :flowers:

 

Love the name, concept, and very impressive accomplishments, the rest will come together. Good luck.